19/02/2015

Rough cut 1 feedback





Slightly different feel from what we had seen in the pitch. We need to make sure we make clear what the storyline is. The idea of the storyline is really good and our teacher is happy about that because it's a storyline she has never seen this before. She's getting the idea that he's not going to be the popular boy, and that we need more scenes with him changing his persona/clothes etc. It's feeling more like a British drama than an American personality double life change in him. 

Need to do:

  • The missing scene of him changing his clothes, hair and transforming into the popular boy (Will be filmed in college)

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